2014년 12월 6일 토요일

Final draft!!♥


Analog voting system should be replaced with e-voting system.



  Election is important. Voting is a human's common right to decide something like a democratic way.  As the democracy had been developed, voting and voting system have begun to have tremendous influence. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful because they are too busy to tend to solve or care politic problem or policy. One vote can change the world. For example, when French revolution, Louis XVI's execution was decided by voting system. Because of this reason, necessity to change and foster analog voting system has been disputed by many people with reasoning analog voting system's negative sides and problems. E-voting system, therefore, has been issued as one of the alternatives. However, some people said that there are much more serious problem on e-voting system. In many countries, therefore, the application of e-voting system has been delayed. In my opinion, we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

  In Italy where e-voting system is partly used, there was a conflict that was about independence between Italy and Veneto which is the city of Italy.(Kuk min news. Park. 2014.) That independence was failed because the number of people who want independence was lower than  the number of people who don't want independence of Veneto and this result was shown in e-voting immediately. We can refer from this example that Europe has used e-voting system and the virtue of e-voting system, E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that we can know the results of voting system immediately. There is one more virtue of e-voting system : increasing the number of participants who vote. The number of participants who vote with analog voting system is decreasing. We can easily find this phenomenon in Korea where the analog voting system was used. According to research from National Election Commission in Korea (graph 1), in president election of Korea, the number of participants who vote with it is decreasing. That is because of some problems of analog voting system that the e-voting system can solve. At this point of view, the number of participants who vote with  an analog voting system has been decreasing in Korea. However, this is not only a Korean's problem because this phenomenon has been shown all over the world. You can check following graph 2 that shows us decreasing number of people who participate in vote(Social Science Data Analysis Network-voter turn out-Graph 2). 




Graph 1




Graph2


We have to know and try to solve the phenomenon because this can be a serious problem. The low participants of vote's result can't represent all of people's opinion, interest and problem which means the democracy. This means that we can be disadvantaged because we can't assert and show our dissatisfaction or discontent. Moreover, this situation can generate disaster of economy and society with a dictator either. To solve this serious phenomenon, I strongly believe that we should replace analog voting system with an e-voting system. There are three reasons in terms of protection of person's right, economy and society.


    First, the e-voting system can protect people's rights for voting and participating because it is opposite from analog voting system which makes people vote with their special paper in a special place. It means that people should go a polling place to vote and their right to vote can be violated if they can't move or vote because of physical disability or working. However, analog voting system has been an obstacle nowadays. Even though a vote was made to listen people's demand and constitution definite it as a right, vote to a right has been violated. E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that people don't have to go polling place. Those who can vote only in their house or company, can vote and their right to vote is protected. 

  Moreover, e-voting system is much more economical than analog voting system. Analog voting system needs much more time to show the result. There is possibility that the result can be spoiled when someone just changes a ballot box. However, The result of e-vote can be shown immediately. It can not be spoiled because "the result is being shown during voting and this must not be changed." (HOA Online Voting System). In addition, the process of vote doesn't need any money because we can vote without the paper or any tool.(Vote Hoa Now-Online Voting Benefit) 
  Lastly, E-voting system can solve serious social problem. As I related before, the number of participants who vote is decreasing because of analog voting system. Therefore, nowadays many social disasters are floating to the surface. For example, increasing number of disadvantaged people and social polarization. E-voting system make people vote anywhere and anytime. With these reasons, I strongly believe that we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.

  However, Many people and country have been delaying or stopping to use it and to replace analog voting system with e-voting system. For example, nowadays, Norway that has used e-voting system decided not to use e-voting system(NPR-Scott Neuman. 2014). Most of that countries are 
worrying about e-voting's security and doubting the positive results of the e-voting system which is undoubtedly positive. Therefore, we can say that their basic worry is about spoiled result that is related with a problem of security, hacking. However, unlike people's thinking, hacking is not easy because a lot of experts will stand by to keep from hacking. In addition, We can solve this problem with the economy. For example, there already are homepages that help people to vote with e-voting system and the homepages have responsibility about hacking. It means they inevitably have to try to protect voting system from hacking. Many universities have tried to decide their student president with e-voting system and used these homepages. There isn't any problem with security. I understand many people worried about the security. However, it is not a big problem because nowadays many of things have been decided by internet with protecting program.

  As I related before, there are many problems on analog voting system which can be solved by replacing it with e-voting system. Because the voting has a powerful influence, these problems can be the disaster. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful. Voting is a unique tool to participate in policy directly. Thus, it is important to solve voting system's problem that can violate people's right. Replacing analog voting system with e-voting system can solve many problems that can be generated by analog voting system and give us many benefits economically, socially. If I'm right, many people who couldn't vote because of handicaps or work will be able to vote without going polling place. Moreover, we can show to people the results of the vote immediately. In addition the number of participants who vote will increase which is a serious problem in society. However, many people said that e-voting can be hacked and the result can be changed. Unlike these people's thinking, these problems also can be solved because the experience of e-voting system can make technology developed. In addition, homepages or experts that have responsibility about the vote will come together to protect results of vote, using so many other internet tool. Therefore I strongly believe we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.







Reference

Kuk min news. Park. 2014  (2014, September 20)
from http://news.kmib.co.kr/article/view.asp?arcid=0922791583&code=11141100&sid1=all&sid2

National Election Commission 2013 Graph1(2013,January 13)
from http://www.ssdan.net/content/voter-turnout

Social Science Data Analysis Network-voter turn out Graph2
from http://www.ssdan.net/content/voter-turnout

HOA Online Voting System
from http://www.votehoanow.com/benefits/

NPR-Scott Neuman. 2014
from http://www.npr.org/blogs/thetwo-way/2014/06/27/326221089/norway-does-a-ctrl-alt-delete-on-e-voting-experiment

Week 3 - objective research - another gragh

Research : benefits of e-voting system

Source : The number of participants who vote in American Presidential Elections

http://www.ssdan.net/content/voter-turnout
I found this research in homepage of online voting system.


My TopicShould we  replace analog voting system with e-voting system?
My argument : we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

What I hope to learn from this source: the number of participants is decreasing.




Now I can support my argument strongly!!

2014년 11월 30일 일요일

Week 15 - APA Citations


Analog voting system should be replaced with e-voting system.



Election is important and Voting is a human's common right to decide something as a democratic way.  As the democracy has been developed, voting and voting system have tremendous influence. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful because they are too busy to tend to solve or care politic problem or policy. One vote can change the world. For example, when French revolution, Louis XVI's execution was decided by voting system. Because of this reason, necessity to change and foster analog voting system has been disputed by many people with reasoning analog voting system's negative sides and problems. E-voting system, therefore, has been issued as one of the alternatives. However, some people said that there are much more serious problem on e-voting system. In many countries, therefore, the application of e-voting system has been delayed. In my opinion, we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

In Italy where e-voting system is partly used, there was conflict that was about independence between Italy and Veneto which is the city of Italy.(Kuk min news. Park. 2014.) That independence was failed because the number of people who want independence was lower than  the number of people who don't want independence of Veneto and this result was shown in e-voting immediately. We can refer from this example that Europe has used e-voting system and the virtue of e-voting system, E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that we can know the results of voting system immediately. There is one more virtue of e-voting system, that is: increase the number of participants who vote. The number of participants who vote with analog voting system is decreasing. According to research from National Election Commission in Korea, in president election of Korea where the analog voting system was used, the number of participants who vote with it is decreasing because of some problems of analog voting system that the e-voting system can solve (National Election Commission 2013.) 



  According to these statistic, the number of participants who vote with  analog voting system has been decreasing in Korea. However, this is not only a Korean's problem because this phenomenon have been shown all over the world. (Social Science Data Analysis Network-voter turn out) We have to know and try to solve it because this can be serious problem. The low participants of vote's result can't represent all of people's opinion, interest and problem which means the democracy. In addition, this situation can generate disaster of economy and society with a dictator either. To solve this serious phenomenon, I strongly believe that we should replace 
analog voting system with a e-voting system. There are three reasons in terms of protection of person's right, economy and society.

  First, the e-voting system can protect people's rights for voting and participating because it is opposite from analog voting system which makes people vote with their special paper in a special place. It means that people should go a polling place to vote and their right to vote can be violated if they can't move or vote because of physical disability or working. However, analog voting system has been a obstacle nowadays. Even though vote was made to listen people's demand and constitution definite it as a right, vote to right has been violated. E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that people don't have to go polling place. Those who can vote only in their house or company, can vote and their right to vote is protected. 
  Moreover, e-voting system is much more economical than analog voting system. Analog voting system needs much more time to show the result and there is possibility that the result can be spoiled when someone just changes a ballot box. However, The result of e-vote can be shown immediately and it can not be spoiled because "the result is being shown during voting and this must not be changed." (HOA Online Voting System) 
  In addition, the process of vote doesn't need any money because we can vote without the paper or any tool.(Vote Hoa Now-Online Voting Benefit) E-voting system can solve serious social problem which is the number of participants who vote decreasing because e-voting system make people vote anywhere and anytime. With these reasons, I strongly believe that we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.

  However, Many people and country have been delaying or stopping to use it and to replace analog voting system with e-voting system. For example, nowadays, Norway which has used e-voting system decided not to use e-voting system.(NPR-Scott Neuman. 2014) Most of that countries are 
worrying about e-voting's security and doubting the positive results of the e-voting system which is undoubtedly positive. Therefore, we can say that their basic worry is about spoiled result that is related with problem of security, hacking. However, unlike people's thinking, hacking is not easy because a lot of experts will stand by to keep from hacking. In addition, We can solve this problem with an economy. For example, there already are homepages that help people to vote with e-voting system and the homepages have responsibility about hacking. It means they inevitably have to try to protect voting system from hacking. Many universities try to decide their student president with e-voting system and using these homepages. There isn't any problem with security. I understand many people worried about the security. However, it is not a big problem because nowadays many of things have been decided by internet with protecting program.

If I'm right serious problem in society. However, many people said that e-voting can be hacked and the result can be changed. Unlike these people's thinking, these problems also can be solved because the experience of e-voting system can make technology developed. In addition, homepages or experts that have responsibility about the vote will come together to protect results of vote, using so many other internet tool. Therefore I strongly believe we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.







Reference

Kuk min news. Park. 2014(2014, September 20)
from http://news.kmib.co.kr/article/view.asp?arcid=0922791583&code=11141100&sid1=all&sid2

National Election Commission 2013(2013,January 13)
from http://www.ssdan.net/content/voter-turnout

Social Science Data Analysis Network-voter turn out
from http://www.ssdan.net/content/voter-turnout

HOA Online Voting System
from http://www.votehoanow.com/benefits/

NPR-Scott Neuman. 2014
from http://www.npr.org/blogs/thetwo-way/2014/06/27/326221089/norway-does-a-ctrl-alt-delete-on-e-voting-experiment


Week 14 - Peer review

1. 20102 김재원 - 4 points
2. 20103 김창준 - 4 points

Grade
20102 재원 : You need to find and search more research. Your essay can not be persuasive without many articles that agree your argument and I hope you to follow classical argument format.

20103 창준 : I CAN NOT FOCUS ON YOUR ESSAY! Please, type 'enter' when you want to write new research or other arguments
 Thesis
What is the thesis?
20102 재원  "So, we need to check dangerous diseases that have threaten us, once even called pandemic." I think it must be your thesis. it is AWESOME.
20103 창준 "However, actual situation is not that good. Actually, I believe that situation is serious and there needs a government's measure to the problem." it must be your thesis because you helped me find this. It is good and I could easily understand what you want to say. However, I think, it is too long.

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes and yes.

Any other thoughts?
More research and classical argument format please.More research and classical argument format please.

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?


Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 


Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?


Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
No and yes

Is the research from appropriate sources?


Are the sources obvious?

2014년 11월 15일 토요일

Second draft



Analog voting system should be replaced with e-voting system.



Election is important and Voting is a human's common right to decide something as a democratic way.  As the democracy has been developed, voting and voting system have tremendous influence. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful because they are too busy to tend to solve or care politic problem or policy. One vote can change the world. For example, when French revolution, Louis XVI's execution was decided by voting system. Because of this reason, necessity to change and foster analog voting system has been disputed by many people with reasoning analog voting system's negative sides and problems. E-voting system, therefore, has been issued as one of the alternatives. However, some people said that there are much more serious problem on e-voting system. In many countries, therefore, the application of e-voting system has been delayed. In my opinion, we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

In Italy where e-voting system is partly used, there was conflict that was about independence between Italy and Veneto which is the city of Italy. That independence was failed because the number of people who want independence was lower than  the number of people who don't want independence of Veneto and this result was shown in e-voting immediately. We can refer from this example that Europe has used e-voting system and the virtue of e-voting system, E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that we can know the results of voting system immediately. There is one more virtue of e-voting system, that is: increase the number of participants who vote. The number of participants who vote with analog voting system is decreasing. According to research from National Election Commission in Korea, in president election of Korea where the analog voting system was used, the number of participants who vote with it is decreasing because of some problems of analog voting system that the e-voting system can solve (National Election Commission 2013.) 



  According to these statistic, the number of participants who vote with  analog voting system has been decreasing in Korea. However, this is not only a Korean's problem because this phenomenon have been shown all over the world. We have to know and try to solve it because this can be serious problem. The low participants of vote's result can't represent all of people's opinion, interest and problem which means the democracy. In addition, this situation can generate disaster of economy and society with a dictator either. To solve this serious phenomenon, I strongly believe that we should replace 
analog voting system with a e-voting system. There are three reasons in terms of protection of person's right, economy and society.

  First, the e-voting system can protect people's rights for voting and participating because it is opposite from analog voting system which makes people vote with their special paper in a special place. It means that people should go a polling place to vote and their right to vote can be violated if they can't move or vote because of physical disability or working. However, analog voting system has been a obstacle nowadays. Even though vote was made to listen people's demand and constitution definite it as a right, vote to right has been violated. E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that people don't have to go polling place. Those who can vote only in their house or company, can vote and their right to vote is protected. 
  Moreover, e-voting system is much more economical than analog voting system. Analog voting system needs much more time to show the result and there is possibility that the result can be spoiled when someone just changes a ballot box. However, The result of e-vote can be shown immediately and it can not be spoiled because the result is being shown during voting and this must not be changed. 
  In addition, the process of vote doesn't need any money because we can vote without the paper or any tool. E-voting system can solve serious social problem which is the number of participants who vote decreasing because e-voting system make people vote anywhere and anytime. With these reasons, I strongly believe that we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.

  However, Many people and country have been delaying or stopping to use it and to replace analog voting system with e-voting system. For example, nowadays, Norway which has used e-voting system decided not to use e-voting system. Most of that countries are 
worrying about e-voting's security and doubting the positive results of the e-voting system which is undoubtedly positive. Therefore, we can say that their basic worry is about spoiled result that is related with problem of security, hacking. However, unlike people's thinking, hacking is not easy because a lot of experts will stand by to keep from hacking. In addition, We can solve this problem with an economy. For example, there already are homepages that help people to vote with e-voting system and the homepages have responsibility about hacking. It means they inevitably have to try to protect voting system from hacking. Many universities try to decide their student president with e-voting system and using these homepages. There isn't any problem with security. I understand many people worried about the security. However, it is not a big problem because nowadays many of things have been decided by internet with protecting program.

As I related before, there are many problems on analog voting system which can be solved by replacing it with e-voting system. Because the voting has a powerful influence, these problems can be the disaster. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful. Voting is a unique tool to participate in policy directly. Thus, it is important to solve voting system's problem that can violate people's right. Replacing analog voting system with e-voting system can solve many problems that can be generated by analog voting system and give us many benefits economically, socially. If I'm right, many people who couldn't vote because of handicaps or work will be able to vote without going polling place. Moreover, we can show to people the results of the vote immediately. In addition the number of participants who vote will increase which is a serious problem in society. However, many people said that e-voting can be hacked and the result can be changed. Unlike these people's thinking, these problems also can be solved because the experience of e-voting system can make technology developed. In addition, homepages or experts that have responsibility about the vote will come together to protect results of vote, using so many other internet tool. Therefore I strongly believe we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.




Bibliography

Week 3 Objective - Research: benefits of e-voting system

Research : benefits of e-voting system

Source : Electronic voting maximizes homeowner participation


I found this research in homepage of online voting system.


My TopicShould we  replace analog voting system with e-voting system?
My argument : we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

What I hope to learn from this source: What people who govern online voting system said about e-voting system






Notes:
  1. e-voting system takes less than a minute to vote
  2. With e-voting system, privacy is kept
  3. No supply costs/No equipment/No time or resource
  4. Quick and Easy/Quick counting/
  5. etc 
Final Thoughts:  e voting system has many benefits.

2014년 11월 2일 일요일

Self evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:
2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.
2) What did you do well?
I wrote narration and confirmation well.
arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings.
3) What could you have done better?
I could have done my concession better. I have to research more and find  professionals or journalists that agree with you and use them as supporting sources

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
confirmation

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
concession

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good I will correct my grammar error and find much more research to make concession better.



2014년 10월 26일 일요일

First draft

 should we replace analog voting system with e-voting system?



 Voting is a human's common right to decide something as democratic way.  As democracy has been developed, voting and voting system have really big influence. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful. Actually, one vote can change the world. For example, when French revolution, Louis XVI's execution was decided by voting system. As technology is developed, many people said that evolution of voting system is necessary with reasoning analog voting system's problems. E-voting system, therefore, has been issued as one of  alternatives. However, some people said that there are much more serious problem on e-voting system. Therefore, the application of e-voting system has been delayed. In my opinion, we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system


In Italy where e-voting system is partly used, there was conflict that was about independence between Italy and Veneto which is city of Italy. That independence was failed because the number of people who want independence was lower than  the number of people who don't want independence of Veneto and this result was shown in e-voting immediately. We can refer from this example that Europe has used e-voting system and the virtue of e-voting system, E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that we can know the results of voting system immediately. There is one more virtue of e-voting system, that is : increase the number of participants who vote. The number of participants who vote with analog voting system is decreasing. According to research from National Statistical Office in Korea, in president election of Korea that use analog voting system, the number of participants who vote is decreasing because of some problems of analog voting system that e-voting system can solve. 

  According to these statistic, the number of participants who vote with  analog voting system has been decreasing and this can be serious problem because the results of vote can't represent all of people's opinion, interest, problem. This situation can generate disaster of economy and society with dictator. To solve this serious phenomenon, we should replace e-voting system with three reasons in terms of protection of person's right,economy,society. E-voting system can protect people's rights for voting and participating because it is opposite from analog voting system which make people vote with their special paper in special place. It means that people should go polling place to vote and their right to vote can be violated if they can't move or vote because of physical disability or working. Vote was made to listen people's demand and constitution definite it as a right. However, E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that people don't have to go polling place. People can vote in home or company and their right to vote is protected. Moreover, e-voting system is much more economical than analog voting system. Analog voting system need much more time to show result and there is possibility that result can be spoiled when someone just changes a ballot box . However, The result of e-vote can be shown immediately and the result of e-voting system can not be spoiled because the result is being shown during voting and this can not be changed. Moreover, process of vote doesn't need any money because we can vote without paper or any tool.  In addition, e-voting system can solve serious social problem which is the number of participants who vote decreasing. However, e-voting system make people vote anywhere and anytime. This trait makes participants of vote increase.


Many people and country have delayed to replace analog voting system with e-voting system because they worried about e-voting's security. Their basic worry is about spoiled result because of hacking. However, unlike people's thinking, hacking is not easy because a lot of experts will stand by to keep from hacking. In addition, We can solve this problem with economy. For example, there already are homepages that help people to vote with e-voting system and the homepages have responsibility about hacking. it means they inevitably have to try to protect voting system from hacking. Many universities try to decide their student president with e-voting system and using these homepages. there isn't any problem with security. I understand many people worried about security. However, it is not a big problem because nowadays many of things decided by internet with protecting program.


As I related before, there are many problems on analog voting system which can be solved by replacing it with e-voting system. Because voting has powerful influence, these problems can be disaster. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful. Actually, Voting is unique tool to participate in policy directly, thus, it is important to solve voting system's problem that can violate people's right. Replacing analog voting system with e-voting system can solve many problems that can be generated by analog voting system and give us many benefits economically, socially. If I'm right, many people who couldn't vote because of handicaps or work will be able to vote without going polling place. Moreover, we can show to people the results of the vote immediately. In addition the number of participants who vote will increase which is serious problem in society. However, many people said that e-voting can be hacked and the result can be changed. Unlike these people's thinking,these problems also can be solved because experience of e-voting system can make technology developed , homepage that has responsibility about vote or experts that will come together to protect like so many other internet tool. Therefore I strongly believe we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.

2014년 10월 25일 토요일

Week 10 - Conclusion

Conclusion


My Conclusion 1

As I related before, there are many problems on analog voting system which can be solved by replacing it with e-voting system. Voting is unique tool to participate in policy directly, thus, it is important to solve voting system's problem that can violate people's right. Replacing analog voting system with e-voting system can solve many problems that can be generated by analog voting system and give us many benefits economically, socially. If I'm right, many people who couldn't vote because of handicaps or work will be able to vote without going polling place. Moreover, we can show to people the results of the vote immediately. However, many people said that e-voting can be hacked and the result can be changed. Unlike these people's thinking,these problems also can be solved because experience of e-voting system can make technology developed , homepage that has responsibility about vote or experts that will come together to protect like so many other internet tool. Therefore I strongly believe we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.

My Conclusion 2

As I related before, there are many problems on analog voting system which can be solved by replacing it with e-voting system. Because voting has powerful influence, these problems can be disaster. However, nowadays, many people don't know how voting and voting system are important and powerful. Actually, Voting is unique tool to participate in policy directly, thus, it is important to solve voting system's problem that can violate people's right. Replacing analog voting system with e-voting system can solve many problems that can be generated by analog voting system and give us many benefits economically, socially. If I'm right, many people who couldn't vote because of handicaps or work will be able to vote without going polling place. Moreover, we can show to people the results of the vote immediately. In addition the number of participants who vote will increase which is serious problem in society. However, many people said that e-voting can be hacked and the result can be changed. Unlike these people's thinking,these problems also can be solved because experience of e-voting system can make technology developed , homepage that has responsibility about vote or experts that will come together to protect like so many other internet tool. Therefore I strongly believe we should replace analog voting system with e-voting system.

Week 9 Objective - Refutation and Concession

Refutation and Concession



1. What is my thesis?
We should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

2. What is the opposite position?
E-voting system is obviously unsecured

3. What arguments can I anticipate?
E-voting system's problems
ex) hacking,security,+ Norway deletes their e-voting system

4. How will I counter those arguments?
Argument about hacking is most vulnerable for me because we can not sure about technology in computer. It is being developed. According to Harvard Sampler, It said that once technology to protect is developed, other technology to fierce it is developed. However, all of experts will come together because election is important for country. If there is hacking, than we just convert it to solve it.


My Refutation and Concession

Many people and country have delayed to replace analog voting system with e-voting system because they worried about e-voting's security. Their basic worry is about spoiled result because of hacking. However, unlike people's thinking, hacking is not easy because a lot of experts will stand by to keep from hacking. In addition, We can solve this problem with economy. For example, there already are homepages that help people to vote with e-voting system and the homepages have responsibility about hacking. it means they inevitably have to try to protect voting system from hacking. Many universities try to decide their student president with e-voting system and using these homepages. there isn't any problem with security. I understand many people worried about security. However, it is not a big problem because nowadays many of things decided by internet with protecting program.

Week 8 Objective - The Confirmation

1. What is my thesis?
We should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using statistic and article from National Statistic Office and news.

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
Although I am using statistic and news article, my arguments are mostly based on logic. In fact, I think that there are too many evidences and there isn't any emotional reason in my topic. Therefore my arguments should be based on logic with some powerful evidences to persuade other person.

My Confirmation


  According to these statistic, the number of participants who vote with  analog voting system has been decreasing and this can be serious problem because the results of vote can't represent all of people's opinion, interest, problem. This situation can generate disaster of economy and society with dictator. To solve this serious phenomenon, we should replace e-voting system with three reasons in terms of protection of person's right,economy,society.
  E-voting system can protect people's rights for voting and participating because it is opposite from analog voting system which make people vote with their special paper in special place. It means that people should go polling place to vote and their right to vote can be violated if they can't move or vote because of physical disability or working. Vote was made to listen people's demand and constitution definite it as a right. However, E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that people don't have to go polling place. People can vote in home or company and their right to vote is protected.
 Moreover, e-voting system is much more economical than analog voting system. Analog voting system need much more time to show result and there is possibility that result can be spoiled when someone just changes a ballot box . However, The result of e-vote can be shown immediately and the result of e-voting system can not be spoiled because the result is being shown during voting and this can not be changed. Moreover, process of vote doesn't need any money because we can vote without paper or any tool. 
 In addition, e-voting system can solve serious social problem which is the number of participants who vote decreasing. However, e-voting system make people vote anywhere and anytime. This trait makes participants of vote increase.