Week 8 Objective - The Confirmation

1. What is my thesis?
We should replace analog voting system with e-voting system

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using statistic and article from National Statistic Office and news.

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
Although I am using statistic and news article, my arguments are mostly based on logic. In fact, I think that there are too many evidences and there isn't any emotional reason in my topic. Therefore my arguments should be based on logic with some powerful evidences to persuade other person.

My Confirmation

  According to these statistic, the number of participants who vote with  analog voting system has been decreasing and this can be serious problem because the results of vote can't represent all of people's opinion, interest, problem. This situation can generate disaster of economy and society with dictator. To solve this serious phenomenon, we should replace e-voting system with three reasons in terms of protection of person's right,economy,society.
  E-voting system can protect people's rights for voting and participating because it is opposite from analog voting system which make people vote with their special paper in special place. It means that people should go polling place to vote and their right to vote can be violated if they can't move or vote because of physical disability or working. Vote was made to listen people's demand and constitution definite it as a right. However, E-voting system is a voting system  that allows people to vote with their computer with internet. It means that people don't have to go polling place. People can vote in home or company and their right to vote is protected.
 Moreover, e-voting system is much more economical than analog voting system. Analog voting system need much more time to show result and there is possibility that result can be spoiled when someone just changes a ballot box . However, The result of e-vote can be shown immediately and the result of e-voting system can not be spoiled because the result is being shown during voting and this can not be changed. Moreover, process of vote doesn't need any money because we can vote without paper or any tool. 
 In addition, e-voting system can solve serious social problem which is the number of participants who vote decreasing. However, e-voting system make people vote anywhere and anytime. This trait makes participants of vote increase.