Self evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

2) What did you do well?

I wrote narration and confirmation well.

arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings.
3) What could you have done better?

I could have done my concession better. I have to research more and find  professionals or journalists that agree with you and use them as supporting sources

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

confirmation

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

concession

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good I will correct my grammar error and find much more research to make concession better.