2014년 8월 31일 일요일

Week 3. Classical Argument Outline

Should we replace analog voting system with e-voting system?

1. The introduction


   (1) Development of computer technology and a modern society
   (2) Development of modern democracy
   (3) Necessity of voting system with democratic represents 


2. The narration


   (1) Definition of analog voting system
   (2) Relationship of Modern society with all kind of voting system
   (3) Necessity of replacement in voting system
   (4) Introduce internet voting system
   (5) Definition of internet voting system
 

3. The confirmation,


   (1) reason 1 : e-voting system can increase number of participants who vote.
        + statistics of newspaper (about low number of participants in analog voting)
   (2) reason 2 : It can protect disabled people's voting right who want to vote but can't
        + statistics of 통계청 (about a number of disabled people)
   (3) reason 3 : People can know the results of voting 


4. The refutation and concession


   (1)opponent's predicted refutation : e-voting can be used for dictatorship because it is easier to fix result of        voting
   >>(1-1)my refutation : It also easier to catch that kind of corruption because it is using internet!!
   
   (2)opponent's predicted refutation : e-voting can be hacked and generate confusion on voting system
   >>(2-1)my refutation : e-voting system has enough protection for hacking and also, if e-voting system is                                            hacked,we can reset and vote again easily and quickly after restoration 


5. The summation


   (1)emphasize why e-voting system should replace analog voting system : 
       1. increasing number of participants
       2. protect right to vote for all people
       3. result of voting
   >> In modern society, democracy can be regressed. In this situation, e-voting can be answer.

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